Essay 2021 Essay Paper 125 marks 1200 words Analyse
Q1
The process of self-discovery has now been technologically outsourced.
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Directive word: Analyse
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Approach
Analyse demands a systematic examination of how technology has transformed self-discovery from an internal, introspective process to an externally mediated one. Structure: Introduction defining 'technologically outsourced self-discovery' → Body analysing philosophical, psychological, social and ethical dimensions with Indian examples → Conclusion balancing technology's utility with the irreplaceability of human agency.
Key points expected
- Philosophical tension between 'know thyself' (Socratic introspection) and algorithmic personality profiling (MBTI tests, AI psychometrics)
- Digital identity construction through social media curation and feedback loops creating 'performed selves' versus authentic self-knowledge
- Datafication of inner life: mood-tracking apps, biometric wearables, DNA ancestry services replacing traditional self-reflection
- Indian context: Astrology apps (AstroTalk, Co-Star) digitizing jyotish; dating apps algorithmizing partner selection once governed by family introspection
- Psychological risks: external validation dependency, echo chambers, loss of solitude essential for self-discovery (Thoreau, Gandhi's experiments with truth)
- Synthesis: technology as mirror versus map—augmenting but not replacing the labour of self-knowledge
Evaluation rubric
| Dimension | Weight | Max marks | Excellent | Average | Poor |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Thesis clarity | 20% | 25 | Establishes a nuanced, contestable thesis: e.g., 'Technology has not eliminated self-discovery but transformed it from solitary introspection to distributed, algorithmically-mediated identity construction, raising questions about authenticity.' | States a clear but simplistic position ('Technology helps us know ourselves better') without acknowledging paradox or tension. | No discernible thesis; merely lists technological tools or wanders between 'technology is good' and 'technology is bad' without resolution. |
| Multi-dimensional coverage | 20% | 25 | Weaves together philosophical (existentialism, Advaita Vedanta), psychological (Jung, modern behavioural economics), sociological (Goffman's dramaturgy, digital sociology), and ethical dimensions (privacy, autonomy) with seamless transitions. | Covers 2-3 dimensions adequately (e.g., only psychological and social) with some but not all connections made explicit. | Single-dimensional treatment (only technology description) or disconnected paragraphs without analytical integration. |
| Examples & evidence | 20% | 25 | Deploys specific, diverse examples: Indian apps (Sarathi AI for career counselling, Practo for health self-monitoring), global platforms (23andMe, Replika AI companions), and counter-examples (Gandhi's autobiography as technology-resistant self-study; tribal communities' oral self-narratives). | Generic references (Facebook, Instagram) without specificity or Indian contextualisation; examples illustrate rather than advance argument. | No concrete examples; or factually incorrect references; or examples merely listed without analytical deployment. |
| Language & flow | 20% | 25 | Sophisticated vocabulary appropriate to philosophical inquiry ('epistemic outsourcing', 'algorithmic governmentality', 'interiority'); varied sentence structures; seamless paragraph transitions that signal analytical progression. | Competent but unremarkable prose; occasional awkward transitions; some repetitive phrasing ('in today's world' used multiple times). | Grammatical errors, SMS-style abbreviations, or disjointed paragraphs that read as bullet points in prose form. |
| Conclusion & forward look | 20% | 25 | Synthesises tension into forward-looking insight: e.g., proposing 'digital sabbath' as constitutional right, or educational reforms cultivating 'techno-skeptical introspection'; avoids both techno-utopianism and Luddism. | Restates thesis without development; generic recommendations ('we should use technology wisely'); no specific institutional or policy imagination. | Abrupt ending; or entirely new argument introduced; or conclusion contradicts body without acknowledging shift. |
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