General Studies 2021 GS Paper I 15 marks 250 words Comment

GS Paper I — Q11

To what extent did the role of the Moderates prepare a base for the wider freedom movement ? Comment. (Answer in 250 words)

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नरमपंथियों की भूमिका ने किस सीमा तक व्यापक स्वतंत्रता आंदोलन का आधार तैयार किया ? टिप्पणी कीजिए । (250 शब्दों में उत्तर दीजिए)

Q11 of the 2021 UPSC Mains General Studies GS Paper I, as printed
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The Moderates (1885–1905: Dadabhai Naoroji, Gopal Krishna Gokhale, Pherozeshah Mehta) supplied the ideas, institutions and political habits on which the mass movement later built, though their reach was narrow.

Political unity and consciousness: By making the Congress an all-India forum with annual sessions, they bridged regional divisions and trained the educated class in public politics.

Economic critique of colonialism: Naoroji's "drain of wealth" theory and R.C. Dutt's Economic History of India broke the myth of benevolent British rule and gave nationalism its economic argument.

Constitutional agitation: Petitions, memorials and council speeches pressed for Indianisation of the civil services, civil liberties and representative government. The Indian Councils Act, 1892 enlarged the councils and admitted a limited indirect election, a modest gain that set a precedent.

Social reform and cadre-building: Ranade's National Social Conference and Gokhale's Servants of India Society (1905) linked reform with public service and trained selfless workers.

Limits: Their base was a narrow, urban, English-educated elite. Faith in British justice and "petition and prayer" won few concessions, and peasants and workers were not mobilised; Extremists called this political mendicancy.

Judgment: The Moderates prepared the intellectual and organisational base, not the mass base. The Extremists and later Gandhi supplied the mass base, building directly on the Moderates' critique and structures.

How this answer will be evaluated

Framework: GS1 History: Movements (causes, social base, methods, limits, legacy)

What earns full marks: Balanced judgment with specific examples of political education and clear limits.

Evaluation rubric

Each sub-part is marked on its own, against the marks and word limit printed on the paper.

  1. The answer Contextualize Moderates' role and provide a balanced judgment on their contribution to the freedom movement. 15 marks · 250 words

    comment— context → arguments both sides → judgment → close

    Must cover

    • Context: 1885-1905 era of constitutional agitation
    • Argument 1: Political education of the educated class and building national consciousness
    • Argument 2: Limitations of 'petition and prayer' approach
    • Judgment: Synthesis of their legacy for Extremists

    Loses marks

    • Narrating chronology without analytical judgment
    • Ignoring the 'limits' or 'criticism' aspect of the role
    • Using emotive language instead of historical analysis

    Earns more

    • Mention of specific demands (e.g., civil services reform)
    • Reference to key Moderate leaders (Naoroji, Gokhale, Ranade, Pherozeshah Mehta, Surendranath Banerjea)
    • Link to the rise of the Extremist faction
    • Mention of the 1909 Morley-Minto reforms

    Extra mark

    • Reference to Naoroji's 'Poverty and Un-British Rule in India' (1901)
    • Mention of the Ilbert Bill controversy (1883) as a precursor
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