General Studies 2023 GS Paper II 10 marks 150 words Compulsory Explain

Q8

e-governance, as a critical tool of governance, has ushered in effectiveness, transparency and accountability in governments. What inadequacies hamper the enhancement of these features? (Answer in 150 words) 10

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अभिशासन के एक महत्वपूर्ण उपकरण के रूप में ई-शासन ने सरकारों में प्रभावशीलता, पारदर्शिता और जवाबदेही का आगाज कर दिया है। कौन-सी अपर्याप्तताएं इन विशेषताओं की अभिवृद्धि में बाधा बनती हैं? (150 शब्दों में उत्तर) 10

Directive word: Explain

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How this answer will be evaluated

Approach

The directive 'explain' requires clarifying the causal relationship between e-governance's stated benefits (effectiveness, transparency, accountability) and the barriers preventing their full realization. Structure: brief acknowledgment of e-governance benefits → systematic categorization of inadequacies (digital divide, infrastructure, legal, institutional) → forward-looking conclusion on bridging gaps.

Key points expected

  • Digital divide and low digital literacy limiting citizen access (rural-urban gap, gender disparity)
  • Inadequate digital infrastructure (connectivity issues, server downtime, cybersecurity vulnerabilities)
  • Legal and regulatory gaps (absence of data protection law until recently, weak cybercrime enforcement)
  • Institutional and procedural bottlenecks (siloed databases, lack of interoperability, resistance to change)
  • Accountability mechanisms not keeping pace (difficulty in fixing responsibility for digital service failures)
  • Citizen-centric design gaps (complex interfaces, lack of grievance redressal integration)

Evaluation rubric

DimensionWeightMax marksExcellentAveragePoor
Demand-directive understanding20%2Clearly recognizes that the question asks for barriers to e-governance's promised benefits, not a general critique of e-governance; maintains focus on inadequacies that specifically hamper effectiveness, transparency and accountabilityPartially addresses the question but drifts into general e-governance challenges or lists benefits without linking to specific inadequaciesMisinterprets the directive as asking for benefits of e-governance or provides an unfocused laundry list unrelated to the three specified features
Content depth & accuracy20%2Covers 4-5 distinct inadequacy categories with precise, factually accurate details; demonstrates awareness of recent developments like DPDP Act 2023, PMGDISHA, and specific portal limitationsIdentifies 2-3 inadequacy categories with basic accuracy but lacks specificity or contains minor factual errors; misses recent policy contextSuperficial treatment with vague statements like 'poor infrastructure'; significant factual errors or anachronistic references; conflates causes and effects
Structure & flow20%2Logical progression from infrastructure → human capital → institutional → legal inadequacies; smooth transitions; each paragraph directly tied to hampering effectiveness, transparency or accountabilityAcceptable organization but some categories overlap or sequencing is arbitrary; occasional disconnect between stated inadequacy and its impact on the three featuresDisorganized or fragmented; no clear categorization; abrupt shifts; word limit mismanagement with disproportionate sections
Examples / case-law / data20%2Deploys 2-3 specific, current examples: rural broadband penetration data (BharatNet gaps), specific portal failures (CoWIN glitches, UMANG limitations), or state comparisons (Kerala vs. BIMARU states); references MeitY reports or Digital India targets vs. achievementsOne relevant example or generic references like 'Common Service Centres' without specificity; examples not tightly linked to the three featuresNo examples, or irrelevant/outdated ones (pre-2014 schemes without context); hypothetical illustrations instead of factual grounding
Conclusion & analytical edge20%2Concise synthesis emphasizing that technological solutionism without institutional reform is inadequate; suggests specific remedy (e.g., digital public infrastructure approach, participatory design) or flags emerging challenges (AI governance, algorithmic accountability)Generic positive conclusion about 'need for political will' or 'holistic approach' without specificity; merely summarizes points madeNo conclusion, or abrupt ending; contradictory final statement; conclusion introduces new inadequacies not discussed in body

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