Philosophy 2021 Paper II 50 marks Discuss

Paper II — Q2

(a) Discuss whether Amartya Sen's idea of justice is an improvement upon Rawl's theory of justice. (20 marks) (b) Explain the…

(a)

Discuss whether Amartya Sen's idea of justice is an improvement upon Rawl's theory of justice. 20 marks

(b)

Explain the reformative theory of punishment and discuss whether this is in tune with human dignity. 15 marks

(c)

Can humanism be a substitute for religion? Explain and evaluate in the context of the present Indian society. 15 marks

हिंदी में प्रश्न पढ़ें
(a)

क्या अमर्त्य सेन की न्याय की अवधारणा रॉल्स के न्याय के सिद्धांत का एक परिष्कृत रूप है ? विवेचना कीजिए। (20 अंक)

(b)

दण्ड के सुधारात्मक सिद्धांत की व्याख्या कीजिए और विवेचना कीजिए कि क्या यह मानवीय गरिमा के साथ सुसंगत है। (15 अंक)

(c)

क्या मानववाद धर्म का स्थानापन्न हो सकता है ? वर्तमान भारतीय समाज के प्रसंग में इसकी व्याख्या एवं मूल्यांकन कीजिए। (15 अंक)

Q2 of the 2021 UPSC Mains Philosophy Paper II, as printed
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(a) Is Sen's idea of justice an improvement on Rawls?

Rawls (A Theory of Justice, 1971) takes a "transcendental institutional" approach: through the original position and the veil of ignorance he identifies two principles (equal basic liberties; fair equality of opportunity and the difference principle) which define perfectly just institutions. It stands in the social-contract tradition of Hobbes, Locke, Rousseau and Kant.

Sen (The Idea of Justice, 2009) argues that the question to ask is not what a perfectly just society is, but how justice can be advanced. His approach is comparative and realisation-focused, in the Enlightenment strand of Smith, Condorcet, Wollstonecraft, Marx and Mill. We do not need to know the perfect arrangement to see that slavery or famine is manifestly unjust, as one can judge that one painting is better than another without agreeing on the perfect painting. Sen also prefers open impartiality (Smith's impartial spectator, with views from outside one's society) to Rawls's closed impartiality, and public reasoning over a single agreed principle. He replaces Rawls's primary goods with capabilities, since equal resources give unequal real freedom to a disabled and a healthy person.

Why it is an improvement: it is practical, attentive to actual lives and global injustice, accepts plural reasons, and has a better informational base.

Limits: Sen offers no determinate principles or institutional design, and he leaves the capabilities unlisted (Nussbaum supplies a list). Rawls's later political liberalism also handles pluralism through overlapping consensus. Sen himself does not claim to refute Rawls but to widen the inquiry.

Hence it is an improvement in method and in what it measures, but a complement more than a replacement.

(b) The reformative theory of punishment and human dignity

The reformative theory holds that the purpose of punishment is to change the offender into a law-abiding member of society. It treats crime as the product of social, psychological or economic conditions, and so replaces retribution and deterrence with education, treatment and rehabilitation. Gandhi's maxim was to hate the crime and not the criminal. In India it is reflected in probation (Probation of Offenders Act 1958), parole, open prisons and the juvenile justice system, and in the Supreme Court's emphasis on reform in Mohd. Giasuddin v. State of A.P. (1977).

In tune with dignity: it regards the offender as capable of moral change, rejects vengeance and cruelty, and keeps open the prospect of return to society.

Against it: Kant objected that punishment treated as a means of changing a person violates his dignity, since he is punished because he deserves it and not for an outcome. Compulsory treatment may override autonomy and be paternalistic. Indeterminate sentences give officials wide discretion, and the theory fits poorly with grave crimes and the victim's claims.

On balance, reform is consistent with dignity if it is offered with consent, proportionality and fair process, and is joined with a recognition of justice for the victim.

(c) Humanism as a substitute for religion in India

Humanism bases value on human reason, dignity and welfare, not on a supernatural authority. Its forms include Feuerbach and Russell's secular humanism, M.N. Roy's radical humanism, and in India Vivekananda's service of humanity (daridra-nārāyaṇa) and Tagore's religion of man.

For substitution: humanism can ground ethics without dogma, avoid conflict among faiths, and aligns with the Constitution's values of dignity, equality and fraternity.

Against: religion also gives meaning, consolation, ritual, community and a transcendent goal, which an ethical code alone does not. Mass moral motivation has historically drawn on faith. In a highly religious society such as India, a demand to replace religion would meet resistance and misunderstanding of secularism.

Evaluation: humanism can replace religion in its ethical and social-reform function, but not its spiritual and communal ones. In India the more workable course is a humanism that coexists with faith, building on shared values such as sarva-dharma-sambhāva (equal respect for all faiths). Humanism is therefore a partial substitute and a complement.

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Framework: UPSC Mains Philosophy Paper II

What earns full marks: Precise technical vocabulary, strong counter-arguments, concrete examples, and clear evaluation.

Evaluation rubric

Each sub-part is marked on its own, against the marks and word limit printed on the paper.

  1. (a) Discuss whether Sen's idea of justice improves upon Rawls's theory. 20 marks

    discuss— intro → 3-4 dimensions → example → balanced close

    Must cover

    • Rawls: transcendental institutionalism; original position; two principles
    • Sen: comparative, realisation-focused; capabilities versus primary goods; open impartiality and public reasoning
    • Reasoned verdict: improvement in method but a complement, noting Sen's lack of determinate principles

    Loses marks

    • Describing the two as the same or one-sided praise
    • Verdict without reasons

    Earns more

    • Manifest injustices can be identified without a perfect model (slavery, famine)
    • Disabled-person example against primary goods
    • Rawls's overlapping consensus and Nussbaum's list as replies

    Extra mark

    • Social-contract versus Enlightenment comparative strands
  2. (b) Explain the reformative theory of punishment and discuss whether it suits human dignity. 15 marks

    explain— definition/context → points in order → small example → short close

    Must cover

    • Reformative theory: crime as product of conditions; rehabilitation instead of retribution
    • Indian reflections: probation, parole, open prisons, juvenile justice
    • Dignity discussion: respects capacity for change versus Kantian and paternalism objections

    Loses marks

    • Equating reformative with retributive theory
    • No discussion of dignity

    Earns more

    • Gandhi's maxim; Giasuddin (1977)
    • Indeterminate sentences, serious crimes and victims' claims

    Extra mark

    • Reform acceptable with consent, proportionality and fair process
  3. (c) Examine whether humanism can substitute for religion, in the present Indian context. 15 marks

    evaluate— criteria → evidence → balanced judgment

    Must cover

    • Humanism: values grounded in reason, dignity and welfare, not a supernatural authority
    • Arguments for and against substitution; religion's roles in meaning, ritual and community
    • Indian context and conclusion: humanism as partial substitute or complement

    Loses marks

    • Portraying humanism as hostile to all religion
    • Taking a partisan political stand

    Earns more

    • Indian forms: Vivekananda, Tagore, M.N. Roy
    • Constitutional values of dignity and fraternity
    • Sarva-dharma-sambhāva

    Extra mark

    • Distinguishes ethical function from spiritual and communal functions
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