Q1
Answer the following questions in about 150 words each: (a) Discuss the role of enlightenment movement in the rise of humanism. (10 marks) (b) In the age of individualism and universal franchise, what role does caste play in body-politic? Discuss. (10 marks) (c) Is corruption a systemic issue or an ethical issue? Give your critical comments. (10 marks) (d) "Complete liberty may lead to inequality while order and restrictions imply a necessary loss of freedom." Critically discuss. (10 marks) (e) What are the moral justifications of capital punishment? Discuss. (10 marks)
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निम्नलिखित में से प्रत्येक का उत्तर लगभग 150 शब्दों में दीजिए : (a) मानववाद के उदय में प्रबोधन (एनलाइटनमेंट) आंदोलन की भूमिका की विवेचना कीजिए। (10 अंक) (b) व्यक्तिवाद तथा सार्वभौमिक मताधिकार के युग में राज-निकाय (बॉडी-पॉलिटिक) में जाति की क्या भूमिका है? विवेचना कीजिए। (10 अंक) (c) क्या भ्रष्टाचार एक तंत्रगत विषय है अथवा एक नीतिशास्त्रीय विषय? अपनी समालोचनात्मक टिप्पणियाँ प्रस्तुत कीजिए। (10 अंक) (d) "सम्पूर्ण स्वतंत्रता असमानता को जन्म दे सकती है, जबकि व्यवस्था तथा प्रतिबंध से अनिवार्यतः स्वतंत्रता के ह्रास का फलन होता है।" समालोचनात्मक विवेचना कीजिए। (10 अंक) (e) मृत्युदंड के पक्ष में कौन-सी नैतिक युक्तियाँ संभव हैं? विवेचना कीजिए। (10 अंक)
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Each sub-part carries equal marks (10), so allocate approximately 30 words per mark—roughly 150 words each. For (a), trace Enlightenment's shift from religious authority to human reason; for (b), analyze caste as both identity and inequality in democratic India; for (c), dialectically examine systemic vs. ethical dimensions; for (d), deploy Isaiah Berlin's positive/negative liberty; for (e), weigh retributive and utilitarian justifications. Maintain analytical balance across all five parts without over-developing any single response.
Key points expected
- (a) Enlightenment humanism: Kant's 'Sapere Aude', rejection of divine right, emergence of secular ethics, and Diderot's Encyclopédie as vehicles of reason-centered anthropology
- (b) Caste in body-politic: Ambedkar's annihilation of caste thesis, caste as vote-bank politics vs. democratic citizenship, creamy layer debate, and persistence of social capital inequality despite formal equality
- (c) Corruption: systemic critique (institutional decay, rent-seeking) vs. ethical critique (moral character, Kautilya's Arthashastra on decay of values), with synthesis through institutional moral agency
- (d) Liberty-order tension: Berlin's two concepts of liberty, Rawls' liberty-principle priority, Rousseau's forced-to-be-free paradox, and Indian constitutional balance (Article 19 reasonable restrictions)
- (e) Capital punishment: retributive justice (Kant's categorical imperative), deterrence theory, incapacitation, and restorative justice counter-arguments; reference to Bachan Singh (1980) rarest of rare doctrine
Evaluation rubric
| Dimension | Weight | Max marks | Excellent | Average | Poor |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Concept correctness | 20% | 10 | Precise deployment of core concepts: for (a) distinguishes Enlightenment humanism from Renaissance humanism; for (b) correctly identifies body-politic as Hobbesian/Aristotelian concept applied to Indian democracy; for (c) grasps 'systemic' as structural-functional critique; for (d) accurately interprets liberty as non-domination vs. non-interference; for (e) distinguishes lex talionis from utilitarian rationales | Generally correct concepts with minor conflations—e.g., treating all humanism as identical, or confusing negative liberty with license; caste described descriptively without theoretical framing | Fundamental conceptual errors: Enlightenment equated with Renaissance, liberty confused with equality, corruption reduced only to bribery without systemic analysis, capital punishment justified solely by emotion |
| Argument structure | 20% | 10 | Each 150-word response follows thesis-antithesis-synthesis or claim-evidence-warrant structure; (c) and (d) explicitly build dialectical progression; smooth transitions between sub-parts maintaining thematic coherence across the whole answer | Clear but linear structure per sub-part; some imbalance with one part over-developed; transitions between (a)-(e) feel mechanical rather than integrated | Descriptive listing without argumentative arc; sub-parts answered as disconnected fragments; no internal organization within 150-word units; conclusion missing or repetitive |
| Schools / thinkers cited | 20% | 10 | Appropriate density: (a) Kant, Voltaire, Diderot; (b) Ambedkar, MN Srinivas, Dumont; (c) Kautilya, Myrdal (soft state), contemporary institutionalists; (d) Berlin, Rawls, Rousseau, Constant; (e) Kant, Bentham, Beccaria, Supreme Court jurisprudence—demonstrating command across Western and Indian traditions | Some thinkers named correctly but superficially integrated; over-reliance on obvious figures (Gandhi, Ambedkar) without specific textual reference; one sub-part may lack any citation | No thinkers named or gross misattribution; generic references ('philosophers say'); confusion between historical periods; anachronistic application of contemporary theorists to pre-modern contexts |
| Counter-position handling | 20% | 10 | Genuine critical engagement: (a) acknowledges Counter-Enlightenment critique (Horkheimer/Adorno); (b) presents caste solidarity as subaltern resistance before critique; (c) fairly presents ethical voluntarism before systemic critique; (d) takes anarchist critique of all restriction seriously; (e) engages abolitionist dignity arguments substantively | Nod to counter-positions without development—'however some disagree' without elaboration; straw-man presentation of opposing views; critical 'discuss' reduced to balanced description | No counter-positions acknowledged; one-sided advocacy; 'critically discuss' or 'comment' directives ignored; dogmatic assertion without recognition of philosophical controversy |
| Conclusion & coherence | 20% | 10 | Each sub-part achieves synthetic closure: (a) links Enlightenment legacy to contemporary human rights; (b) prognostic note on caste's democratic transformation; (c) integrated systemic-ethical diagnosis; (d) constitutional prudence as resolution; (e) measured assessment of abolitionist trends; cross-cutting theme of reason, rights, and limits emerges across all five | Serviceable conclusions per sub-part but no meta-coherence; final sentences merely summarize rather than advance; some sub-parts end abruptly | No conclusions; answer stops at analysis without synthesis; or repetitive restatement of introduction; five disconnected mini-essays without any unifying philosophical sensibility |
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