Philosophy 2024 Paper II 50 marks Critically discuss

Q6

(a) Is it necessary to adhere to the notions of immortality of soul and rebirth in order to have a robust conception of liberation? Give reasons and justifications for your answer. (20 marks) (b) How does the notion of God in Spinoza's philosophy embedded in his metaphysics of substance and attributes? Critically discuss. (15 marks) (c) "The problem of evil is a direct offshoot of how God is conceptualised in a system." Critically discuss. (15 marks)

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(a) क्या मोक्ष की सुगठित अवधारणा के लिए आत्मा की अमरता तथा पुनर्जन्म की अवधारणाओं को मानना आवश्यक है ? अपने उत्तर के पक्ष में तर्क तथा प्रमाण प्रस्तुत कीजिए । (20 अंक) (b) स्पिनोजा के दर्शन में ईश्वर की अवधारणा किस प्रकार उनकी द्रव्य तथा गुण की तत्त्वमीमांसा में अन्तर्बद्ध है ? आलोचनात्मक विवेचना कीजिए । (15 अंक) (c) "अशुभ की समस्या, ईश्वर की किसी मत में किस प्रकार अवधारणा की जाती है, उसका सीधा परिणाम है ।" आलोचनात्मक व्याख्या कीजिए । (15 अंक)

Directive word: Critically discuss

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Approach

The directive 'critically discuss' demands balanced exposition with evaluative judgment across all three parts. Spend approximately 40% of word budget on part (a) given its 20 marks, and roughly 30% each on parts (b) and (c). Structure: brief unified introduction framing liberation, Spinoza's God, and theodicy as interconnected themes; then three distinct sections addressing each sub-part with internal critical analysis; conclude by synthesizing how metaphysical assumptions about soul, substance, and divine nature shape philosophical approaches to evil and freedom.

Key points expected

  • For (a): Analysis of liberation (moksha) in Indian schools—Advaita Vedanta (immortality essential), Buddhism (anatta, no soul, yet liberation via nirvana), Carvaka (no liberation, only death), and contemporary debates (Aurobindo's integral yoga vs. naturalistic ethics)
  • For (a): Critical evaluation of whether rebirth is necessary—compare Nyaya-Vaisheshika (liberation requires soul's eternity and karmic rebirth) with Mimamsa (heaven as goal, liberation secondary) and modern naturalist critiques
  • For (b): Exposition of Spinoza's substance monism—God as causa sui, infinite substance with infinite attributes, thought and extension as known attributes, modes as modifications
  • For (b): Critical discussion of pantheism/immanentism—God not as transcendent creator but as natura naturans/naturata, with implications for freedom, determinism, and the denial of teleology
  • For (c): Analysis of how theological premises generate the problem of evil—classical theism (omnipotence + omniscience + benevolence vs. evil yields logical/evidential problem) vs. process theology (Whitehead, Hartshorne: God as dipolar, not omnipotent)
  • For (c): Indian perspectives—Sankhya's purusha-prakriti dualism explaining evil as prakriti's independence; Ramanuja's visishtadvaita (soul's dependence on God); Buddhist pratityasamutpada (evil as dependent origination, no creator God needed)

Evaluation rubric

DimensionWeightMax marksExcellentAveragePoor
Concept correctness20%10Precise definitions: for (a) distinguishes jivanmukti vs. videhamukti, anatta vs. anatman; for (b) accurately renders Spinoza's Ethics I (substance, attributes, modes) without conflating pantheism with panentheism; for (c) correctly identifies logical vs. evidential problem of evil and matches solutions to their metaphysical premisesGenerally accurate but with some conflation—e.g., treating Spinoza's God as 'nature' simplistically, or eliding differences between Buddhist anatta and Hindu anatman doctrines; understands liberation as 'freedom' without technical specificityMajor conceptual errors: attributes Spinoza's God to Leibniz, confuses moksha with svarga, treats problem of evil as purely ethical rather than metaphysical, or misidentifies Indian schools' positions on soul and rebirth
Argument structure20%10Each sub-part builds a coherent arc: thesis-antithesis-synthesis for (a); deductive reconstruction of Spinoza's Ethics I followed by critical assessment for (b); premise-analysis-consequence-evaluation for (c); clear signposting between parts with thematic links (e.g., Spinoza's necessitarianism informing his dissolution of traditional problem of evil)Adequate structure within parts but weak transitions; arguments present but not always building toward critical evaluation; some parts descriptive rather than argumentativeDisjointed or list-like presentation; no clear thesis in any part; confuses the three sub-questions or fails to address the 'critically' aspect; conclusion merely summarizes without integration
Schools / thinkers cited20%10Rich, accurate citation: for (a) Sankara, Nagarjuna, Dharmakirti, Aurobindo; for (b) Spinoza (Ethics I), Curley's interpretation, Bennett on necessitarianism; for (c) Leibniz (theodicy), Hick (soul-making), Mackie (logical problem), Plantinga (free will defense), Whitehead, Ramanuja; Indian examples include Kumarila Bhatta, Jayarashi BhattaSome relevant names but limited depth—mentions Spinoza, Sankara, Leibniz without textual specificity; may cite 'Buddhists' or 'Advaitins' generically; misses secondary literatureFew or incorrect attributions; confuses philosophers (e.g., Spinoza with Spinoza's contemporary critics); omits Indian thinkers entirely or misidentifies schools; relies on vague 'some philosophers argue'
Counter-position handling20%10For (a): presents Carvaka's materialist critique and naturalist alternatives (Marxist, humanist) as serious challenges, then evaluates; for (b): engages Jacobi's 'atheism' charge, Hegel's critique of Spinoza's acosmism, and contemporary debates on whether Spinoza allows genuine agency; for (c): weighs skeptical theism, process theodicy, and Buddhist 'no-God' response as genuine alternatives, not straw menAcknowledges opposing views but treats them superficially or only in conclusion; for (b) may mention 'pantheism controversy' without explaining stakes; for (c) lists theodicies without assessing their metaphysical presuppositionsOne-sided presentation or no counter-positions; dismisses alternatives without argument; for (a) ignores Buddhism entirely; for (c) assumes problem of evil only affects theism, ignoring non-theistic systems
Conclusion & coherence20%10Synthesizes three parts into unified thesis: metaphysical commitments regarding soul/substance/God determine whether liberation is possible, what form it takes, and whether evil requires theodicy; demonstrates how Spinoza's immanent God dissolves both traditional liberation (as escape) and traditional problem of evil; may gesture toward contemporary relevance (ecology, panpsychism)Separate conclusions for each part without integration; restates main points without advancing synthetic insight; weak connection between Spinoza's metaphysics and the broader theme of divine nature and evilMissing or perfunctory conclusion; contradicts earlier claims; fails to address the question's implicit demand for comparative assessment across Indian and Western metaphysics

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