General Studies 2024 GS Paper I 15 marks 250 words How

GS Paper I — Q19

Globalization has increased urban migration by skilled, young, unmarried women from various classes. How has this trend impacted…

Globalization has increased urban migration by skilled, young, unmarried women from various classes. How has this trend impacted upon their personal freedom and relationship with family? (Answer in 250 words) 15 marks

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वैश्वीकरण ने विभिन्न वर्गों की कुशल, युवा एवं अविवाहित महिलाओं द्वारा शहरी प्रवास में वृद्धि की है। इस प्रवृत्ति ने उनकी व्यक्तिगत स्वतंत्रता एवं परिवार के साथ संबंधों पर क्या प्रभाव डाला है? (उत्तर 250 शब्दों में दीजिए)

Q19 of the 2024 UPSC Mains General Studies GS Paper I, as printed
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Globalization-driven growth in knowledge services, IT, finance, and healthcare has accelerated the migration of skilled, young, unmarried women to urban centers, fundamentally transforming their personal agency and familial ties.

Impact on Personal Freedom Urban skilled employment provides direct financial autonomy, transitioning women from economic dependents to primary asset-builders. This economic leverage enhances spatial mobility and broadens lifestyle choices. Migrant women increasingly embrace independent living arrangements, delayed marriage, and alternative choices such as cohabitation, directly challenging orthodox patriarchal surveillance. However, these freedoms are class-differentiated: while upper-middle-class professionals leverage high disposable incomes for comprehensive lifestyle autonomy, lower-tier service sector migrants often navigate spatial precarity, unsafe transit, and lower wages, circumscribing their actual freedom.

Transformation of Family Relationships Substantial remittance flows sent by migrant women have altered intra-household power dynamics, elevating their voice in familial decision-making, asset creation, and sibling education. Yet, this does not signify a complete rupture with tradition, but rather a practice of "negotiated patriarchy." Women continuously balance newfound professional autonomy with enduring filial obligations, at times grappling with emotional care deficits. Concurrently, digital connectivity via platforms like WhatsApp and video calling enables real-time transnational and trans-regional familial bonding, maintaining close kinship ties while allowing physical separation.

Ultimately, urban migration has enabled young women to shift from passive domestic conformity to active, negotiated empowerment. While it has democratized family relations and expanded personal liberties, achieving substantive freedom requires mitigating the urban precarities and dual burdens of traditional-modern expectations that these women continue to navigate.

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Framework: Society: continuity, data, intersectionality, then solution

What earns full marks: Analyzes the tension between autonomy and family duty with specific examples.

Evaluation rubric

Each sub-part is marked on its own, against the marks and word limit printed on the paper.

  1. The answer Examine how urban migration of skilled, young, unmarried women under globalisation has affected their personal freedom and family relationships. 15 marks · 250 words

    discuss— intro → 3-4 dimensions → example → balanced close

    Must cover

    • Context: growth of IT, finance, health, retail and services jobs; women migrating for education and work (PLFS/Census migration data)
    • Personal freedom: income and financial autonomy, choices on marriage, career, living arrangements and lifestyle; exposure to new norms
    • Constraints: safety concerns, housing discrimination, gendered wage gaps, precarious contracts, surveillance and moral policing; class differences in the experience
    • Family relationships: remittances and greater voice in decisions, delayed marriage negotiations, 'negotiated' rather than broken ties, digital connectivity, intergenerational tensions and care obligations

    Loses marks

    • Assuming uniform liberation or uniform oppression
    • No discussion of family relations

    Earns more

    • Sociological concepts: individualisation, patriarchal bargain, networked families
    • Policy support: working women's hostels (Sakhi Niwas), safe transport, POSH Act 2013

    Extra mark

    • Contrast with less-skilled women migrants in domestic work or garment factories
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